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Re: Breaking Dawn Parody
Thank you for the comments! They are very much appreciated. Lukas8u: I understand what you are saying about working on other things. I just wanted to let you know that ...
Mar 14, 2009 -
Re: Emma Hereford- Chapter I Part I
Oh thank you! You've been most helpful! I think a prologue would be the best solution. I'll get working on that. Again, thank you so much! -Winter
Feb 1, 2009 -
Re: Emma Hereford- Chapter I Part I
Thanks for clarifying! Hmmm... I guess Emma does act rather unnatural. However there are a few crucial details not mentioned in this part of the story. I was going to ...
Feb 1, 2009 -
Re: Chapter 2 of Ballerina *edited* 2/4/09
Alright, on with the review! Excitement filled the air as us Picard women put on petticoats and refreshed our curtsies. I think you should say "we Picard women" instead of ...
Jan 30, 2009 -
Re: 16th Street
Hmmm... Interesting. I understand how you wanted to make the piece sound like the thoughts of a child. That's a nice idea, actually, once you understand it. But do want ...
Jan 28, 2009 -
Re: New Moon Parody
Oh I know! I'm going to add that part. hahaha I totally agree about Dakota, she does look eight! Maybe more like 10... But still, the volturi? Aren't they supposed ...
Jan 26, 2009 -
Re: Emma Hereford- Chapter I Part I
Thanks for reviewing everyone! Samuel Garrison, I think you may be a bit confused. Or perhaps it is I who is confused. You say that Emma is keen on staying ...
Jan 26, 2009 -
Re: Prologue: Here Comes Goodbye
Just letting you know that I added more to my review if you want to check it out. Wisemann did a good job of explaining. :D
Jan 24, 2009 -
Re: Breaking Dawn Parody
Thanks for reviewing/commenting to everyone who liked it/didn't like it! And thanks for the gold stars! I love writing these, they're such a great way to waste time. I have ...
Jan 22, 2009 -
Re: New Moon Parody
Thanks! I'm glad you both liked it! I'm planning on writing an Eclipse and Twilight parody as well. I'm writing these out of order, obviously. I'm still working on this ...
Jan 17, 2009 -
Re: Emma Hereford- Chapter I Part I
Thanks for reviewing! I changed some of the story around and I fixed a couple of other things. I'm trying to decide what should happen next... I'm not totally sure ...
Jan 14, 2009 -
Re: Breaking Dawn Parody
I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for the star.
Jan 7, 2009 -
Re: Breaking Dawn Parody
Haha thanks! I changed role to roll, and I'm working on adding more to it. I'm thinking about writing a New Moon parody because that was my least favorite Twilight ...
Jan 6, 2009 -
Re: Breaking Dawn Parody
I'm not a very witty person. I do have a talent for sarcasm, but for some reason it it hard for me to come up with witty things. By the ...
Jan 6, 2009 -
Re: Breaking Dawn Parody
Thanks Shadowbox, but I'm not really interested in being on youtube. I'm glad you liked it though!
Jan 6, 2009
